Our Time Now- Rough Cut

This is the Rough Cut of our music video. We only made it roughly 40 seconds long for us to get a feel of our song, which so far looks promising. We hope to keep the majority of the edits and the scenes in the final video, and I hope that if the rest of the video is like this or better we could have a decent final product.
 After showing this to other people in our class, we feel that their concerns and likes are the same as ours. The main issue was with the editing, as they mostly said that the transitions caused a problem in quality, as well as the less than ideal lighting in multiple scenes.